Auntie Nim

Auntie Nim was a delightfully infuriating bundle of internal contradictions. Industriously lazy and deeply introverted, she invented the most entertainingly involved excuses for staying home with a good book, doing nothing of note. Her cloudy scowl was seldom a harbinger of rain, let alone thunder; just beneath the surface of her stormy external demeanor, Auntie Nim was a generous burst of laughter and sunshine. Stingy with criticism, but lavish with praise – the perfect traits in an aunt. Wasn’t it the sacred duty of aunts to spoil their nieces rotten and drive their sisters batty? If so, then Auntie Nim excelled at aunthood, frequently doing both at once without even trying.

Admittedly, putting a saddle on the Chihuahua and passing it off as a “miniature purse-pony” for Thea’s sweet sixteenth might have been over the top, but she smiled at the memory of pulling Thea’s feet back onto the ground while scraping her sister’s jaw off the floor.


Today’s flash fiction story was inspired by Writing Prompts – Creative Copy Challenge #479. The prompt included the following words: Frequent, Seldom, External, Internal, Generous, Stingy, Industrious, Lazy, Rain, Sunshine.

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Holly Jahangiri is the author of Trockle; A Puppy, Not a Guppy; Innocents & Demons; and A New Leaf for Lyle. You can find her books on Amazon at For more information on her children's books, please visit
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    1. LOL – try it. It gets easier with practice, and your story can be as short (it can even be a poem!) or as long as it needs to be.

      In college, I had an instructor who liked to challenge us with five random, fifty-dollar words – “Use them all in a single sentence that demonstrates you understand the meaning of the words. It cannot be a run-on sentence.” It could, however, be a very LONG sentence; it just had to be grammatically correct.

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    1. Thanks, Tina! My stories usually run a bit longer, but once I had the idea for this one, it practically wrote itself. Funny thing: I write as if I were reading for the first time. The endings to my stories usually surprise ME as much as they do anyone else.
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  2. Holly,

    I believe this is my first time visiting and it’s nice meeting you. I hope to have plenty of opportunities this month to get to know you better and I very much appreciated you stopping in to join me with #AprilA2Z Art Sketching Through the Alphabet Letter “A” +#BoTB featuring angels for my subject. Have a good weekend!

    1. Thank you, Cathy! I enjoyed your sketches and look forward to stopping by again! You’ve inspired me – we “not-an-artists” should doodle more often and share our work, anyway. I may do that, too, before the month is out!

  3. Auntie Nim sounds like the kind of Aunt I’d like to be for my twin nieces!:))) Enjoyed getting to know her, Holly. Not sure the poor dog enjoyed being dressed so though! :)))

  4. Oh the pic of that dog is just adorable. What a humorous n warm post to kick-start the challenge.

  5. The picture of the Chihuahua all saddled up had me roaring with laughter! I enjoyed reading this post…and getting to know Aunt Nim…I would love to have her around!

  6. I loved your flash fiction theme and Aunty Nim is really cool to read ..looking forward to read more !!

    1. Thanks, Ruchi!

      The theme is actually “Food, Fantasy, and Fiction.” Figured that would give me plenty to work with, throughout the month. Glad you enjoyed this one. Glad the bouncer finally got the message and let you leave a comment, too. 😉

      Seriously, I can’t blame him for this one – there was nothing in spam at all. But your last comment did show up in moderation, finally!
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    1. Thanks! I used to dread April Fool’s Day. My husband is the master of pranks and subtlety. One year, though, I turned the tables on him. That was the year he quit pulling any pranks (though for the first year or two, that was the biggest prank of all, since I’d wait in fear till midnight!). I think he knew, once I got in the game, myself, things would escalate. 🙂
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  7. Wow! You have used the seemingly disconnected words really well in describing one person! Very well done.

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