Detritus at Dawn

Apr 4, 2025 | Poetry, Writing

Today’s PAD prompt was to write about “an unexpected mess.” I experience unexpected neatness, now and then, but have no idea what is this “unexpected mess” whereof you speak…

Detritus at Dawn

I learned of black holes from an early age:
My mother swore her neatness was a sleight of hand,
a trick involving rakes and Hefty bags
that in unseemly haste were shoved atop
a mound of mismatched shoes, our dirty clothes,
behind the winter furs, the musty suits,
an ancient travel case—and yet I knew
the woman was a witch. I never found
black plastic bags, leaf-rakes, or detritus.
Neat rows of high-heeled shoes, a make-up bag,
a pearl-handled, empty-barreled gun,
a hundred matchbook souvenirs, and suits—
matched smartly with an endless set of ties
(worn once) I'd given Dad for Father's Day.
That's when I knew the brutal truth, of junk
she'd rounded up and made to disappear.
Can't say now, was it awe I felt, or fear,
When contemplating closets through the years?

Holly Jahangiri

Holly Jahangiri is the author of Trockle, illustrated by Jordan Vinyard; A Puppy, Not a Guppy, illustrated by Ryan Shaw; and the newest release: A New Leaf for Lyle, illustrated by Carrie Salazar. She draws inspiration from her family, from her own childhood adventures (some of which only happened in her overactive imagination), and from readers both young and young-at-heart. She lives in Houston, Texas, with her husband, J.J., whose love and encouragement make writing books twice the fun.

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