Bram deftly spread the picnic blanket, allowing it to unfurl like a silk sail in a gentle breeze before settling over the soft sand. He placed poles around the large blanket and draped mosquito netting and a brightly colored canvas shade over the poles. His toil earned a smile from his beloved, Diana.
Bram lit charcoal briquettes in the portable grill as the sun dipped towards the sea. Heโd been marinating catfish in buttermilk for hours; now, he dredged them in cornmeal, salt, pepper, and other spices โ Dianaโs favorite โ and laid them over the coals. Their glow now matched the darkening sky, tinged orange behind blue-black clouds far away on the horizon, dusted softly in brilliant white.
Diana thought back to the day she and Bram first met. It was the oddest thing: like a bird without wings, something large had whirled, round and round, plummeting with a heavy splash into the ocean. A man, cocooned in cables and silk, dressed in puffy, sponge-like overalls. Something was attached to his feet โ each of them strapped to a piece of smooth, shaped wood of equal size, unlike the driftwood Diana was used to seeing in the ocean. It had shattered on impact, bits of it floating away in the waves. Diana pulled off the manโs sodden outer clothing before it could weigh them both down and drown him. She dragged the man through the surf, to the shore, where Bram sprinted towards them from the cliffs.
Diana felt shy under the strangerโs gaze and pulled a clump of seaweed around the lower half of her body. He didnโt seem to notice as he dropped to the sand and felt for a pulse. Faint, but regular. Bram felt the manโs skull, neck, ribs, arms, hips, and legs for fractures. Nothing broken, he murmured. Thatโs when he noticed the strange, broken footwear. โSnow skis? What the Hell?โ How did a snow skierย end up in the ocean? Bram wondered. He looked towards Diana, who shrugged. What could she say?
The fallen man moved. He was breathing on his own, at least. The handsome stranger stopped pumping his chest. โI called 911. They should be here any minute.โ The woman smiled. A quiet one. โIโm Bram. Bramley. My friends just call me Bram.โ And Iโm rambling, he thought. โI should go up, make sure they find us down here. Youโll stay with him?โ Diana nodded. She didnโt want to โ didnโt dare โ but she didnโt have the heart not to.
When Bram returned with paramedics, Diana slipped quickly into the dark waves and vanished. It wouldnโt be long, though, before they met again. Bram came to this little crescent of beach every week or so. He had just wiped out after surfing a choppy wave. As he surfaced to gasp for breath, there she was, elbows resting on his board, laughing eyes twinkling with sun and seawater. โWell, there you are.โ Bram floated on the other side of his surfboard. โYou disappeared, last time. I hoped Iโd see you again.โ Bram smiled. โDo you have a name?โ
โIโm Diana,โ she said.
Well. She had a voice, after all, thought Bram. And a name. โNice to meet you, Diana.โ
โHowโs the man we rescued?โ she asked.
โHeโll live. But itโs the damnedest thing. Sounds like he was supposed to be dropped over that mountain slopeโโ Bram pointed to a snow-covered peak about 10 miles inland. โSome sort of parachute-to-ski adventure. A combination of nerves, a premature jump, and unexpected tradewinds blew the poor guy way off course. Heโs lucky, I guess, to land in water where you could get to him. Couldโve been worse.โ
Diana nodded. People did such brave, stupid things, sometimes. Well, what are you doing, right now? Diana wondered, annoyed at her own recklessness.
Bram and Diana had an unusual relationship; in some ways, they were more like an old married couple than a couple of furtive lovers. They had a son together; their boy, Dylan, would be heading off to university in the fall. But they had only met here, at this spot, once a month, for the past twenty years. Sometimes, just the two, sometimes the three of them.
The tent provided peace, shade, and privacy. Together, Bram and Diana ducked inside. โI wish you didnโt have to go,โ whispered Bram, brushing a strand of hair away from Dianaโs cheek, tucking it behind her ear.
โYou always say that,โ she said, cupping his face in her slender hands. She leaned in to kiss him and he pulled her close.
โThat doesnโt make the reality of it any easier, Di.โ
She touched his forehead with her lips. โNo. Youโll tell Dylan come to visit me, wonโt you?โ Dylan lived with Bram most of the year, but he was a young adult who could come and go as he pleased. Dylan knew that he was loved. And he knew he had the best of both their worlds.
โAs long as you promise to keep him safe, and send him back to me.โ Bram grinned. Diana nodded. It broke her heart to bits, each time. If she were in charge of all things, the three of them would never have to part. Dylan and Bram, her reasons for being. Neither would ever make Dylan choose one over the other, nor would he.
โLet me go check on our dinner.โ He hitched the curtains to the side poles to let in the breathtaking sunset. The last rays were golden flashes on the water. Above the sun, the sky was streaked in Mai Tai hues of red, orange, and yellow, painted on blue-gray silk. Bram dished up the catfish and served it with a sesame and Thai pepper seaweed salad. They ate in silence, there on the shore. Diana found the spicy pepper delightful on her tongue. It made all the flavors of an otherwise bountiful life before Bram seem bland.
They made love on the soft, blanket covered dune. Diana rested her head in the crook of Bramโs arm, as she had on so many moonlit nights before this one, humming an ancient sea song. He never meant to fall asleep, afterwards, but he always did. Diana saw to that with a voice that could lull a whole ship full of sailors far off course. She listened to Bramโs deep, easy, breathing, willing him to dream of her till morning. As darkness ate away at the large, bright disc of the moon, Diana slipped into the waves on legs that felt shaky and weak, like a newborn foalโs. As they resumed their natural amphibious form and strength, Diana dove to the bottom of the sea, and wept.
This story brought to you through the inspriation of Writing Prompts โ Creative Copy Challenge (wordpress.com) and the words Net, Bounty, Toil, Sand, Blanket, Shore, Wave, Skier, Charcoal, Briquettes. The words, themselves, first brought to mind a twist on one of my favorite old โurban legendsโ: Dead Scuba Diver in Tree | Snopes.com I wanted to try twisting it in reverse. I hope you enjoyed it!

So lovely! Did you post this on Race to the Hugo? I’m ashamed to say I haven’t written anything for it yet!
I have not! (Yet.) I’m ashamed to say that I didn’t think of it, but maybe I should! Thanks for the idea. Time you, Mitchell, and I get serious about our project again!
(ALSO, I just gave the bouncer a bloody nose. I don’t know why he keeps shoving you into the hall closet. I am SO sorry.)
You certainly flipped the legend on its head. Lovely, descriptive writing here.
Cheers,
Mitch
It was fun to do that. I like flipping things on their heads and twisting tales.
I see what you did there. LOL
This is delightful and so fun to read. Great work Holly!
Thank you, Lynne! I’m glad you enjoyed it.
Holly ~ I like your title. It draws one in, but it does not give away what “I” will be reading about.
You drew me in to this story. I didn’t suspect that she was a mermaid until a long way into the piece. Bravo.
I love how you included lore: …Diana saw to that with a voice that could lull a whole ship full of sailors far off course…
Write On, please!
Kathleen
And thanks for letting the Creative Copy Challenges inspire you.
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